Tuesday, 26 March 2019

Anzac Timeline

In class for topic we have been learning about Anzac day Mrs Hahn brought in a box of items, and said every item has a story. We learn't about the soldier and had to build a timeline on them. We used easily to make the timeline and it had to include the basic information and the soldier we were researching. Start from the bottom and work the why up.  
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  1. Anonymous28 March 2019 at 12:25

    Hey Liam, It's your friend Deakyn here. Your post really caught my eye with all of the colours. You were really clear with describing your soldier. I found a mistake in your blurb, you said why instead of way. Maybe next time you could've actually said that the box was full of old items that were just remakes of the real things. You should come check out my blog because I have my timeline up on my blog too.
    Kind Regards
    Deakyn

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  2. Anonymous1 April 2019 at 10:23

    Hi Liam I'm Solly from Awahono School. I love the time line that you have used it describes the the order of events perfectly. I found only one mistake, in your blurb you said why instead of way apart from that no mistakes. Keep the great work up.

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.

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